Paterson: Book II, Chapter 1, p. 45--(so close are we to ruin every day!) II

(so close are we to ruin everyday!)

Graham:
you can have
my leg-skin
(when I die),
if you want it.


KMC 10/29/13

Paterson, Book II, Chapter 1, p. 55-56

Capital of Call and Response

Let me

say again:

the present

is never present.

Yes, I know:

a pun.

The implication, of

course, is our gifts

are behind us:

signifying old feelings

through old money

and at times

celebrating the

ongoing nature

of things.

But of course,

none of us can wait

to open them.

How could we?

Another call

and response.

A confirmation

of existence

a moment ago

and a moment

ago;

a string of pearls

run backwards

to ourselves.

Words!

Sing!

Song!

Thing!

But this sermon

is tired;

 and I am

spent.

More sense,

borrowed from sense;

more pretense

borrowed from tense.

So much giving back,

so much taking—

and then

taking—

but always, like
sound, like
light, in
waves...

My words, and

your words;
my words, and
your words
are currency.

KMC 10/18/13

Paterson, Book II, Chapter I, p. 59

Desire and the Evangelist (from the ten minute imagist)

sweaty bodies stick skin to skin, roll over onto a remote

the channel changes

yelling forth from the screen goes unnoticed

Paterson: Book II, Chapter I, p. 61

To Be Good Dogs; or, the Need for Resistance of Memory

I.

Listen: we see seconds of our futures.

It’s true: two Stanford doctors proved it.

Their experiment involved a woman

watching a computer screen as images

flickered past every two seconds or so.

Some were cheerful: puppies, rainbows, ice cream. 

Others were horrible: just death, death, death.

What happened next surprised everybody

except the two doctors: the woman’s brain,

monitored from another room, began

to flicker—once before the horrors, not

at all before the joys.  She had sensed them
more than two seconds before they were seen.

II.

Conclusions, for the doctors, are easy,

but less so for us.  What does it mean, that

we can see two seconds of our futures? 

Not long enough to hit the brakes; not far

enough to stay away from the rotten

branch, the alley, the sophisticated

lover and his Gauloises.  Not fast

enough to keep us from wishing to go

backward, dreaming of different outcomes,

and the steps that would have arrived at them. 

These two seconds have never arrested

the accumulation of our singular

story, drop by drop, a cave formation

of ourselves, out of ourselves, from ourselves.

III.

We are seeing in the wrong direction.

Let me know what has been, singularly.

Do not let us see ourselves as desired.

Arrest not time, but my thinking of it.

What, then, is the truth of those few seconds?

Time, as if it were a mother, places

its hands on our cheeks, turns our faces

away from our first and our truest love:

the want of keeping, want of memory.

We, like bad children, pull away, hide

our faces, avoid contact with her eyes,

and refuse to see; instead, only sense—

and those few seconds, in ones and twos, lose

out, and are delayed.  They are resisted.

KMC 4/19/13

Paterson: Book II, Chapter 1, p. 45--(so close are we to ruin every day!)

(so close are we to ruin every day)

the waves begin so forcefully

and move so rapidly light flecks from them

in urgent bursts

of unbelievable whiteness.

Windows break, as bodies also break,

and thousands of eyes collect, signal, and transmit

a thing not yet filtered, understood, or seen.

...

Death pushes me from death.

The spectacle adds distance

in years, thoughts, and means:

I cannot die like this.

I know your secret, my betrothed:
you are not a ghost,
you are a lover.  Like a lover,

I know you less for your body,

and I make you exotic.  

I cannot die

Like this.

I will sleep in. 

...

8 minutes ago,

the sun erupted

 like a million

Hiroshimas;

plasma flared

one hundred thousand miles

into empty space;

and light explodes

across the foot of my bed

like a bomb.

KMC 4/16/13

Paterson: Book II, Chapter I, p. 45--"How Do I Love You? These!"/Preceding Whispered Voices (II)

A Note to Readers:

You should not listen to such notes.  Nevertheless, here: I read Graham's poem by this title not an hour ago, and it is both beautiful in its own right and profoundly convicting for me, and for how I feel about this project.  You see, I have always craved the detachment Paterson gave me.  It was a place full of interest, and emotion, and tragedy, and all the things that make art so fascinating to make.  But it was only obliquely "my" place.  This meant that my personal engagement with these poems has always been primarily intellectual: their content fascinates and engages me, but it has never worked in the other direction: I have not truly poured myself into anything I have done here.  But Graham just broke the fourth wall in this regard.  And I will reciprocate.  This poem is not carefully crafted.  I'm not sure if its metaphors hold, or if its structure is sound--I intuited those things as I wrote them, but this time--for the first time--I tried to capture myself, rather than a version of myself dressed up in period costumes.  It's not always pretty.  In fact, it's blatantly hypocritical.  But this project is more, now, than a wild shot at innovation and interest.  It's been seven years, and it's a part of who I am, and a part of who Graham is. And that Graham is also a part of who I am is absolutely true.  Thank you, Graham, for continuing to do this thing with me.  KMC



"How Do I Love You?  These!" / Preceding Whispered Voices (II)


No!
Pillar of Salt!

I will not remember
you!  I know how
that little game goes!

Isn't that what this has all been about?
The falls aren't the river,
they're the past.  They're the
spectacle we make of the water
that's gone.
The falls are the memory we have
of a thing not there
at all.

There are no "falls."  There is
water, and rock, and the flowing
of one over the other.
"Paterson" will not be a name we give
to a thing we cannot hold,
a thing we cannot keep,
a thing we cannot know,

unless we are carried along within it.

(200 steps...)

No!
Spectator!
Mythmaker!
Critic!
Poet!
Historian!
Geographer!


The falls are a place on a map
picked up from a convenience store
somewhere up Haledon Avenue--
halfway to Franklin Lake.

The falls are a dot
you think you see
from the summit of Mt. Garrett--
that sleeping giant
of Williams's verses,
on its side
in the New Jersey flats--
snow crusted
around the bases
of trees.

(another 200 steps, and then...)

No!
I will not play another game with you
old man!

I will not set down in a place
what is not in a place.
I will not surrender what breathes
to a memory.
It is not a memory.
I, like Lot's wife, know
how treacherously memory works.

There can be no reflection
without a pause to take it in.
There is no name
that does not undo what has been named.
There is water.
There is water.
There is water.
                                I will remember this!

I will remember this.

Help me.
No more poems.
No more metaphors.
I'm done with fish and their nets.
I'm done with Paterson and its ghosts.
I will not look back.

We know what happens to those who do.

I will flow over the rocks of the falls
and you will flow over them with me.
We will jump
as Sam Patch once jumped.
Let others tell the story
or take the picture
or write the poem.

I will not remember
you wrongly.


KMC 4/11/13

Paterson: Book II, Chapter I, p. 45--"How Do I Love You? These!"/Preceding Whispered Voices

A Note to Readers:

You learn to ignore authorial intent when you become an English major. Most of us really grasp it with Emily Dickinson. As it turns out, it's not interesting for very long to read her poems through the "crazy-recluse-in-only-white-clothes" lens. I thought, however, that this deserved an explanation.

In this latest incarnation of the Paterson Project, Kenny and I have been doing very little revising and drafting. I did a little more on this one, but not a lot. One of my favorite things that happens when writing happened to me here: I learned what I really wanted to say while moving through the writing process. It started as a poem about about the love of a poem, but as you will see, it turns into a poem about friendship and the love of a friend. A different approach to this poem would have revised away the transition and the change from one to the other, but I decided to leave it since it shows the growth of the poem and, in a way, the growth of our friendship.

Far be it from me to tell someone how to read a poem, but that's what this one is about. Take it or leave it, I suppose. To paraphrase Eliot, these are private words addressed in public.

"How Do I Love You? These!"/Preceding Whispered Voices

The falls contain it: 

Heraclitean fire 

gone cold. 

Icy mists collect, sedimentarily.

Dirt and grime 

swallowed in the whiteness 

covered again

by dirt and grime.

Look east, to the rolling.

The sounds of the wind are not of the wind at all.

Standing in Paterson's ear the sound of the wind is 

the sound of a mouth blowing over a bottle, of lips 

over an embouchure hole, ear and skull as instrument, 

moving, swaying, fighting against the musician, 

shifting pitch with an internal manipulation.

The sound flows over the crevice of the riverbed, through the bridge 

and the swirls of water and eddying pools add to it.

Where the poem becomes the poem, where it always started.

Ah, love, let us be true. 

To lean over the steel of the bridge and peer into the heart

is to see into the beginning and the end and to begin again.

From beyond the edge

the sounds are those of a broken city

rent asunder

by time and misplaced hopes.

But here, here is where it all begins! Look here, Paterson! Look here, Angels!

The first time we stood here we were but boys, alive

with the expectation of the falls, with the turbulence of the Passaic.

We broke into Hinchcliffe, and later learned we had stood

on sacred ground: Gibson, Paige, Cool Papa

and more played there. Our memories, gleaming of half-extinguished

thought, change and begin again and we hear the sound of

Gibson's bat. We scuttled beneath rusty fences into ruins

of industries long dead and in them we found beauty, stole bricks, then home.

The world hangs over Paterson. The steel of its bridge, 

the brick of its power plant, the Passaic.

The second time we stood there we came in from East Rutherford,

Flossie and Bill's graves. 

The unremembered remained, the falls remain, a source

of what will be. But we also saw Paterson, and in short, we were afraid.

The city, ravaged and decaying, beauty in the grit but not in the suffering.

Our lives new again, he with a child now, our exploration this time, 

was different, sadder.

Paterson falls, the Great Falls, the fallen. 

To be reborn anew? 

For the falls, always. For Paterson, only hope remains.

A couple of months after my wife and I had placed 

my daughters' two little brass urns deep into the soil, 

into one grave (they had only ever known each other), it was

him I stood with to see the marker for the first time.

A brass name plate on cold marble, it is what I touch now

when I want to feel close to them. Then, I stood,

shaking, despairing, weeping, his heavy arm looped 

around my shoulder, his other hand grasped the bridge

of his nose, lifting his glasses away from the tears

as they streaked his pale skin. In that moment

he held me together, as only hope remained.

We had had Paterson, thankfully, because now

I needed more.

Paterson: Book II, Chapter 1, p. 45--Unrequited; or, Exiling One's Self from One's Self

Unrequited; or, Exiling One’s Self from One’s Self

This is based on a true story

(which it cannot be):

All of us—all human beings—

can see into the future.  There ain’t

no need for a palmist or sooth-

sayer or shit.  But there is not one of us—

not one!—who can see into the past, 

even though it just happened 

a fuckingnano-second ago, 

to us. 

Let me prove it to you: 

Sooner or later, the world ends

in fire, with burning seas and spew-

ing mountains all over the place. 

BUT

looooong before that, people—

all human beings--are going to 

fuck themselves to death 

with all sorts of machines, 

and sex robots, and business deals 

and pollution-laser shit. 

Meanwhile, in the forests,

plants will make seeds,

seeds will make more plants,

and the earth will rise straight up

out of the ocean, like a tumor,

or an earthworm in fresh soil. 

And all of this I know already.

And all of this I will take. 

But you hear me first,

before you leap into that future:

In the corner of this room—

This very room!—a television is telling me

America used to be famous. 

I say: My God, to who, goddammit?

KMC 4/9/13